Posted by: flashaku | June 26, 2008

Beautiful nature ugly city poem

I live in the town,
In a street.
It is crowded with traffic,
And feet.
There are Buses and Motors,
And Trams.
I wish there were Cows,
And Lambs.
The people all wait for a Boat,
For a row.
There is smoke everywhere,
That I go.
I don’t like the noise,
That I hear.
I wish there were sound proof walls,
Every where.
There is only one thing,
That I bear.
And that is cookies,
To share.
There are plenty of cookies,
For everybody.
For friends and families to donate,
To anybody.

Rai Akash Santosh,P.6 Student,Sir Ellis Kadoorie Primary School


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  1. dear akash,
    first of all i want to praise you for your creative writing. your all poems are beautiful but i love to read poems like ‘beautiful nature ugly..’, i will be waiting your fresh poems. thanks. hangyug.


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